So here’s the deal, make a poem then you’ll pass. Sounds easy right?
So this was my second proposal. A trash, a cliche. I
'm a poet in the making. Chos!
Here’s the explanation why this was not accepted.
A=B; Word=slaps; CLICHE
B=C; Slap= hard hand; PREDICTABLE
A=C ;Word= hard hand; STRONGER LINE (METAPHOR)
That was her explanation, and this was explained at criticize in the face of my classmates. Only a few knew that it was my poem being discussed. At first I was kinda diyahe. But it is all right since at least I know what to do next.
Maam G. said that most of the beginners start their poem with a cliche then followed by a predictable line.
So that’s it for today